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First I sang to the sun by ~Tar1988:iconTar1988:



First I sang to the sun,
Silent symphonies of sweet summer love
but the sun shone on,
and nothing happened.

Then I sang to the tree,
Touching tunes of tragic love
But the tree stood still
and nothing happened.

Then I sang to the world,
Mysteries of music, a magical love
But the world moved on
and nothing happened.

Then I sang to you,
Myriads of melodies, one true love.
You gave me a smile,
and the world fell into place.
©2007-2009 ~Tar1988
:icontar1988:

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It had been quite a while since I last wrote something romantic, so here it is.

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:iconn-g-e:
This is both a bit philosophical and romantic and I like it...whee...mushy poetry ;)

On the other hand, for some reason I thought of Sinfest (it's a web comic I've been reading for what now seems like ages)...I guess I'm deranged.
:icontar1988:
I have no idea what Sinfest is or might be, but I'm very glad you like it :) thanks for the fav !

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"hell is other people"
-Sartre

"each man is his own hell"
-Tar

"All in all, it's pretty much hell all the way, no matter how you slice the cake."
-Adrian Daniels

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:iconxxsillygirlxx:
Hee hee, that's so cute! XD Sort of sounds like something I'd do in the beginning--pouring out my heart to things that don't notice, lol. XD Great job!

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"But you were the one who saved me." :blush:
:iconmatt-taylor21:
very good =D...i do like it :clap:

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you have value; you are important; choose to be the best you; you can be (just a thought)=D
:iconrmrippers:
now normally i cant STAND soppy love poetry cos its all so... well, so cheesy

but this is fab. lovely mate. you gots the talents

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But that was the problem with my dreams. They were always too realistic.

I’ll stick to my faux crème doughnut instead of my chocolate fondant
:icontar1988:
thanks silly girl :)

--
"hell is other people"
-Sartre

"each man is his own hell"
-Tar

"All in all, it's pretty much hell all the way, no matter how you slice the cake."
-Adrian Daniels

Join the revolution ! [link]
:icontar1988:
glad that you like it :)

--
"hell is other people"
-Sartre

"each man is his own hell"
-Tar

"All in all, it's pretty much hell all the way, no matter how you slice the cake."
-Adrian Daniels

Join the revolution ! [link]
:icontar1988:
:bow: :)

--
"hell is other people"
-Sartre

"each man is his own hell"
-Tar

"All in all, it's pretty much hell all the way, no matter how you slice the cake."
-Adrian Daniels

Join the revolution ! [link]
:iconrmrippers:
i absolutely love that bowing smiely

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But that was the problem with my dreams. They were always too realistic.

I’ll stick to my faux crème doughnut instead of my chocolate fondant

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