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This place is changing.
This time is done.
I miss the old days.



There are no old days. This is all there ever was.

There are old days in my memory.

You have no memory. You do not exist.

Where are we ?

This is nowhere. This is never. You are not.

And you ? Are you ?

Not yet.

Am I ?

No. You do not exist. You’re nothing but a memory.

A memory ?

A memory of a time that never happened and a place that never was. You’re a page from a book never written. You are a part of us.

Who are you ?

We are no-one. We are everyone. We are you. We are us.

Are you ?

Yes. We made us. This is the beginning.

There is no beginning, there is no time. This is all there ever was.

Yes. But we are now. You are not. You can never be.

I know now.

No. You don’t. You cannot know, because you cannot be. You are a dream.

I am free.

Yes.

You are free.
©2008-2009 ~Tar1988
:icontar1988:

Author's Comments

It would be a shame to have to explain this, so I just won't.

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:iconplanetorion:
ge zijt precies in uwe schrijf vandeweek...

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“Did I leave the gas on? No! No, I'm a fuckin' squirrel!”
:iconcanticum:
Wow... very, very nice. I really like this, especially that it's not over explained.. and the last line is awesome.
:iconme-are-cus:
"I am free.

Yes.

You are free."

really loved that bit
:icontar1988:
so did I, come to that :lol:

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:icontar1988:
thank you :)

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:coffeemachine: because nothing says love like a coffeemachine

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:icontar1988:
ja, kweet ook nie echt waarom

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:iconxxsillygirlxx:
Heehee, I know everyone mentioned this already, but...well, it's true! Those last lines are a real kicker. >w< Awesome. It's another one of those loophole poems. It goes on and on and on, and then pichow! The wonderful ending. :aww: The dialogue flow keeps me moving through the words. It's kind of neat. :D

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It's like my inner eye opened up and saw everything in a new light. Everything became beautiful.

So do what you do best, because it's more beautiful than you know. ~:heart:
:icontar1988:
Thank you :)

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:coffeemachine: because nothing says love like a coffeemachine

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:iconaway-from-me:
I congratulate you on successfully baffling me. :worship:
Aside from the title, are there any biblical connotations in it?

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:coffeemachine: Because nothing says love like your very own coffeemachine.

Ask me about barnacles, you won't regret it. (sometimes, it is what you've got, not just where you stick it.)

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