I love you
I always will.
Even after this
I’ll love you still.
Ever since we first met,
I have always loved you
I believe that’s what I first said,
Back then, but it's still true.
I love you.
And I still do.
Even though
You don’t want me to.
You walked away,
There was nothing left to say
Only that I loved you
But I think you knew...
I said: I love you
You said: I don’t care.
I said: I want you
You said: don’t you dare.
You kept on singing
Where I withered away
You kept on living
Where I died that very day.
I don’t know if you cried,
Not that it matters...
Know that, before I died,
My soul already lay in tatters.
And as the blood stained my bed.
I felt at peace with the world.
Because when you learned of my death
You knew it was your fault.
I love you
I always will.
And even now
I love you still.
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"hell is other people"
-Sartre
"each man is his own hell"
-Tar
"All in all, it's pretty much hell all the way, no matter how you slice the cake."
-Adrian Daniels
Join the revolution ! [link]
Hee hee my favorite stanza:
I said: I love you
You said: I don’t care.
I said: I want you
You said: don’t you dare.
I like your way of rhyming without trying to stretch the rhyme. Like...if you wrote a line and think of a word that rhymes but go out of your way to fit it in there. -_- Then it sounds ugly.
But not in yours! Everything's smooth and pretty! Yay!
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Your words are kind are your heart is true. If all in Hyrule are like you...then maybe you'll do all right.
See you later!
I was going to re-write it, to make it a bit darker, but I'm not so sure about that now, ppl seem to like it as it is. I guess I'll just make a new one.
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"hell is other people"
-Sartre
"each man is his own hell"
-Tar
"All in all, it's pretty much hell all the way, no matter how you slice the cake."
-Adrian Daniels
Join the revolution ! [link]
and I can feel what you say in that poem
(except from the 'die'-part of it
really great...
but i think that there are some points where the rimes are a bit euh (int nederlands: zo een paar plekke waar et zo een beetje wringt...)
kga ook verdertype int nederlands dus
kwou maar zegge da da eigelijk nie echt uitmaakt aangezien de inhoud van uw gedicht echt veel sterker is.
en ik denk dat dit hier ook het belangrijkste is...
kherken het uw gedicht en da vindek altijd wel wijs...
echt mooi dus
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“Did I leave the gas on? No! No, I'm a fuckin' squirrel!”
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"hell is other people"
-Sartre
"each man is his own hell"
-Tar
"All in all, it's pretty much hell all the way, no matter how you slice the cake."
-Adrian Daniels
Join the revolution ! [link]
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